Thursday, March 2, 2006

No. 1

Dreams quickly turn as
Midnight's eye opens slowly
To digest morning.
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2 comments:

  1. ginpitwarriorMarch 10, 2006 at 7:28 AM

    What about the night's eye opened slowly? Slow on the end seems to stand out a bit. IMO

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  2. Paul GrimsleyMarch 14, 2006 at 9:33 AM

    Have dropped the word "the" and changed to slow to slowly, thanks for the idea.

    Paul

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